1) Chapter 1: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning.508599-- The Beginning
2) Chapter 1: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-2.516939
3) Chapter 1: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-3.526823
4) Chapter 2: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-4.556609-- Colin consults with a friend on Gretchen's condition.
5) Chapter 2: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within5.618537-- A dark personality is revealed.
6) Chapter 2: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-6.626057-- Gretchen recovers after the incident with the dark personality.
7) Chapter 3: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within7.624149
8) Chapter 3: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within8.634125-- Revelations
9) Chapter 4: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within9.639001
10) Chapter 4: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within10.642399-- Tests **Warning: This chapter contains violence**
11) Chapter 4: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within11.652213
12) Chapter 5: Part 1 Moving...Forward?-- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within12.715845
13: Chapter 5: Part 2 Trapped! -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within13.792203
Wednesday, June 17, 2009
Segment #13 added:
Labels:
aliens,
blood,
killing,
multiple personalities,
murder,
sci-fi,
serial novel
Monday, June 1, 2009
#12) Chapter 5: Part added
Here are the links to read the story so far:
1) Chapter 1: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning.508599-- The Beginning
2) Chapter 1: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-2.516939
3) Chapter 1: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-3.526823
4) Chapter 2: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-4.556609-- Colin consults with a friend on Gretchen's condition.
5) Chapter 2: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within5.618537-- A dark personality is revealed.
6) Chapter 2: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-6.626057-- Gretchen recovers after the incident with the dark personality.
7) Chapter 3: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within7.624149
8) Chapter 3: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within8.634125-- Revelations
9) Chapter 4: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within9.639001
10) Chapter 4: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within10.642399-- Tests **Warning: This chapter contains violence**
11) Chapter 4: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within11.652213
12) Chapter 5: Part 1 Moving...Forward?-- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within12.715845
1) Chapter 1: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning.508599-- The Beginning
2) Chapter 1: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-2.516939
3) Chapter 1: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-3.526823
4) Chapter 2: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-4.556609-- Colin consults with a friend on Gretchen's condition.
5) Chapter 2: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within5.618537-- A dark personality is revealed.
6) Chapter 2: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-6.626057-- Gretchen recovers after the incident with the dark personality.
7) Chapter 3: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within7.624149
8) Chapter 3: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within8.634125-- Revelations
9) Chapter 4: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within9.639001
10) Chapter 4: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within10.642399-- Tests **Warning: This chapter contains violence**
11) Chapter 4: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within11.652213
12) Chapter 5: Part 1 Moving...Forward?-- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within12.715845
Monday, April 13, 2009
Those Who Dwell Within.10 - Chapter 4: Part 2 Excerpt
[Excerpted from Triond, as violence is not allowed on that site]
The guards leapt forward to restrain DMJ, one from the back, the other went around to face her. Another loud ripping noise and the DMJ’s right leg hit the guard in front of her squarely between the legs. He groaned and hunched over. DMJ’s leg shot upwards and connected with his chin. There was a sickening crack and the guard slumped down on the floor, his eyes glazed over.
Meanwhile the nurse had regained her senses and scrambled with her key to get out the door. Amazingly she still had the vial of blood clutched in her hand as she escaped from the room. DMJ let out a startled gurgle as the guard behind her wrapped his arm around her neck. Her right fist flew up and hit the guard in the face. He flinched but didn’t move. She hit him again, and still he didn’t let go. Two more loud tearing sounds and DMJ had all her limbs free. With amazing agility, her right leg flew up and hit the guard in the forehead. Stunned momentarily the guard’s choke hold loosened just a bit. DMJ reached up with both hands and grabbed his head like a basketball and flung it. The guard’s feet flew up into the air and his body sailed across the room. He hit the wall squarely on his back, his head still downwards. His body landed belly first on the hard floor.
Colin was watching all this in horror from the safety of the other room. Dr. Kemora was shouting into a cell phone, the attendants had already left the room in a hurry. He knew it had been a bad idea for Dr. Kemora to call out the Dark Mary Jane personality. Her full strength was unknown, and her coldness seemed to make her a heartless killer. Not sure of what, if anything, he could do, Colin sat and continued to watch the horrific scene in the patient’s room progress.
The door flew open and guards armed with guns rushed in. DMJ had picked up the guard she’d flung against the wall. He groaned in pain as she lifted him above her head and promptly threw him at the one way mirror. His body slammed into the glass causing it to crack wildly, but it still held together. Several shots rang out and a tranquilizer dart whizzed by DMJ’s head to bounce off the damaged mirror. Three other darts hit her in the back and shoulder. She whipped around to face the guards that had shot her. As she leapt toward them, more shots rang out and two more darts hit her in the thigh and hip. Undeterred she was upon the foremost guard with blinding speed. DMJ grabbed his gun and shoved it upwards against his face. Blood burst from his nose. She wrenched the gun from his hands and rammed the butt of it against the side of his head. As he fell over she smashed the gun into his head again, this time clearly cracking his skull. In one fluid motion the gun went from the guard on the ground to meet the knee of the next nearest guard. He screamed in pain and fell to the floor, clutching at his wounded leg. Another guard lunged forward with a tazer and immediately found his hand in the iron grip of DMJ’s. She twisted his wrist and then broke his arm like a twig. Pulling him forward DMJ brought her knee up and her elbow down to snap his spine. Before his body even hit the ground she had punched the next guard in the throat causing him to stagger backwards while choking up blood.
To continue - Return to Triond:
http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within10.648713
The guards leapt forward to restrain DMJ, one from the back, the other went around to face her. Another loud ripping noise and the DMJ’s right leg hit the guard in front of her squarely between the legs. He groaned and hunched over. DMJ’s leg shot upwards and connected with his chin. There was a sickening crack and the guard slumped down on the floor, his eyes glazed over.
Meanwhile the nurse had regained her senses and scrambled with her key to get out the door. Amazingly she still had the vial of blood clutched in her hand as she escaped from the room. DMJ let out a startled gurgle as the guard behind her wrapped his arm around her neck. Her right fist flew up and hit the guard in the face. He flinched but didn’t move. She hit him again, and still he didn’t let go. Two more loud tearing sounds and DMJ had all her limbs free. With amazing agility, her right leg flew up and hit the guard in the forehead. Stunned momentarily the guard’s choke hold loosened just a bit. DMJ reached up with both hands and grabbed his head like a basketball and flung it. The guard’s feet flew up into the air and his body sailed across the room. He hit the wall squarely on his back, his head still downwards. His body landed belly first on the hard floor.
Colin was watching all this in horror from the safety of the other room. Dr. Kemora was shouting into a cell phone, the attendants had already left the room in a hurry. He knew it had been a bad idea for Dr. Kemora to call out the Dark Mary Jane personality. Her full strength was unknown, and her coldness seemed to make her a heartless killer. Not sure of what, if anything, he could do, Colin sat and continued to watch the horrific scene in the patient’s room progress.
The door flew open and guards armed with guns rushed in. DMJ had picked up the guard she’d flung against the wall. He groaned in pain as she lifted him above her head and promptly threw him at the one way mirror. His body slammed into the glass causing it to crack wildly, but it still held together. Several shots rang out and a tranquilizer dart whizzed by DMJ’s head to bounce off the damaged mirror. Three other darts hit her in the back and shoulder. She whipped around to face the guards that had shot her. As she leapt toward them, more shots rang out and two more darts hit her in the thigh and hip. Undeterred she was upon the foremost guard with blinding speed. DMJ grabbed his gun and shoved it upwards against his face. Blood burst from his nose. She wrenched the gun from his hands and rammed the butt of it against the side of his head. As he fell over she smashed the gun into his head again, this time clearly cracking his skull. In one fluid motion the gun went from the guard on the ground to meet the knee of the next nearest guard. He screamed in pain and fell to the floor, clutching at his wounded leg. Another guard lunged forward with a tazer and immediately found his hand in the iron grip of DMJ’s. She twisted his wrist and then broke his arm like a twig. Pulling him forward DMJ brought her knee up and her elbow down to snap his spine. Before his body even hit the ground she had punched the next guard in the throat causing him to stagger backwards while choking up blood.
To continue - Return to Triond:
http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within10.648713
Thursday, April 9, 2009
Those Who Dwell Within - ALL Links
Here are the links to read the story so far:
1) Chapter 1: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning.508599
-- The Beginning
2) Chapter 1: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-2.516939
3) Chapter 1: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-3.526823
4) Chapter 2: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-4.556609
-- Colin consults with a friend on Gretchen's condition.
5) Chapter 2: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within5.618537
-- A dark personality is revealed.
6) Chapter 2: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-6.626057
-- Gretchen recovers after the incident with the dark personality.
7) Chapter 3: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within7.624149
8) Chapter 3: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within8.634125
-- Revelations
9) Chapter 4: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within9.639001
10) Chapter 4: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within10.642399
-- Tests **Warning: This chapter contains violence**
11) Chapter 4: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within11.652213
1) Chapter 1: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning.508599
-- The Beginning
2) Chapter 1: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-2.516939
3) Chapter 1: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/The-Beginning-3.526823
4) Chapter 2: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-4.556609
-- Colin consults with a friend on Gretchen's condition.
5) Chapter 2: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within5.618537
-- A dark personality is revealed.
6) Chapter 2: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within-6.626057
-- Gretchen recovers after the incident with the dark personality.
7) Chapter 3: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within7.624149
8) Chapter 3: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within8.634125
-- Revelations
9) Chapter 4: Part 1 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within9.639001
10) Chapter 4: Part 2 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within10.642399
-- Tests **Warning: This chapter contains violence**
11) Chapter 4: Part 3 -- http://www.authspot.com/Novels/Those-Who-Dwell-Within11.652213
Monday, February 9, 2009
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